Unforegivable

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by The Elemental Dragon (queen of dragons) on Sunday, 17-Jun-2007 22:04:55

Here's another one of my random ideas for a story.

Unforgivable

Summary: Sacara wants to be someone. She wants to make something with her life. She gets endowed with the powers of the gods. Wind, Water, Fire and Earth. There are four children who control a single one of the elements but she controls all four. Sacara does many horrible things but then after one act she performs she can not forgive herself. Will those around her be able to forgive her or is this act unforgivable.

Prologue

The immortals of light and darkness stood watching as their blood brothers and sisters entered the room. The immortal of light was known as the queen and the immortal of dark was known as the king. The king and queen were the ruling power in society. Their daughter Sacara was, in their minds the perfect puppet. She had been molded to obey any order given to her since a very young age. The king and queen loved her unconditionally and they both knew that she would do great things. Terrible but great. The other immortals moved aside as Sacara walked slowly down the center isle

Sacara walked down the center isle her eyes never wavering were trained on her parents. She was going to get the bulk of her powers today and she was thrilled. When the day was over she could head out on her own, doing as her heart desired. She had a small ceremonial dagger and as she took the last step to the throne she knelt down and slashed her wrist.

The brown hared teen felt something being bound to her arm and she called up her powers one by one. First came earth and the audience saw what seemed to be a swirling mass of flowers and the scent of fresh earth after a rain storm. Next was water and a vortex of bluish liquid was absorbed into the body along with the smell of a fresh ocean air. Wind was next and the hair on the top of everyone's heads was blown around. Last was fire and the faint smell of smoke from a roasting pig wafted through out the room.

The king unbound the crystal from her wrist and Sacara stood up. Her physical features were the same but in her eyes was a bright burning fire, ready to be unleashed. Sacara turned around to see her parents looking at her before she bowed and vanished from the room.